Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Holiday Challenge

In writing we wrote a holiday challenge poem.I wrote mine about a wallaby park. I hope you like it.


I heard the wallabies mouths going chomp as I handed them their crumble food.

I heard mum heaving and hoeing as she lifted the heavy gate.

I saw their sharp claws grasping onto me as they ate.

I felt funny when the wallabies ate from my hands.

I felt happy when I stroked their soft fur near its tail.

I wondered if we would run out of food to feed them.

I wondered what the surprise at the end was going to be.

2 comments:

  1. Great poem Jonte. I love Wallabys. Were you at the park near Waimate?

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  2. I don't remember struggling with the gates. I'll need to get fitter!

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